to discuss anything
this is my very first poem ever
Published on January 25, 2004 By Dancez_With_Wolves In Personal Computing
To Hold You

I sit in the darkness holding you in my arms,
as I stroke your hair and wipe the tears from your eyes,
and tell you that everything will be ok.

I sit in the darnkess,
feeling the softness of your skin,
admiring the miracle that has been created,
promising to care for you forever.

I sit in the darkness singing your favorite song,
listening to the tiny breaths you breathe,
hoping that you know I love you.

I sit alone in the darkness,
remembering how beautiful and special you are,
tears gently rolling down my cheeks,
wishing To Hold You one more time.......

Laurie (Me) - January 25, 2004

please let me know what you think
Comments
on Jan 25, 2004
I liked it. GCJ
on Jan 25, 2004
thanks GCJ
on Jan 25, 2004
I like it even more now that I know why you wrote it. GCJ
on Jan 25, 2004
Thankyou again. Alot of people won't know the meaning behind it unless they look a bit further. Thankyou for taking the time to read my other post.

Laurie